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Bhai pure english likhunaa too koi bhi naa padega aur aur phone sai todi mistak to ho jatibhai
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UPDATE 5 (MEGA )



UPDATE 5. FALSHBACK


Aap soch rahe honnge ki aakhir dev ko hua kaya hai.

To chalate hai 1ghhannata picche jab doctor ghar aate hai usske maa ka ellaj karne to Dev ghar sai bahar aa kar khuch budbuda raha tha

Dev- uss chutiye ki vajah sai aaj. Maine maa ke saath sab ka dil khhucch jada hi dhukka diyaa aaj saala bhecega nahi mere haato sai.

Yahi sab socchte hue vo AAGE bad raha tha.

Ek jagah par khucch dost appas mai baate kr rahe the. :

Vikky - ku kar rahe ho bakkchodi
Ku kar rahe ho bakkchodi
jab tumnne kisi ki bhen nhai chodii

Sarre dost -wah bhai maja aa gaya

Vikky - abe dinesh tu bhi kuch sunna bhai

Dinesh- raat ka tha vakkhat tha
Raat kaa tha vakkhat tha
Hum kar rahe de khhudai
Par sala hum to yah bhul hi gaye ki padoss mai hi ho rahi hai chudai .

Ha ah aha aha ha
Vikky - ab chup karo vo dhekkho maal aa rha hai

Dinesh -kaya figure hai bhai ek baar mik jaye too.....

Vikky -millege millege par yaha sai to uthho

Dono uss ladaki ke pass ja kar
Arre ooo janeman kaha ja rahi ho matak matak ke.

Ladki - mudd kar tum yaha bhi aa gaye

Dinesh - arre bhai ye to aapna hi school ka maal hai

Ladaki -aaee mr tamij sai baat kar

Dinesh -teri tamij tu apnni ch...uuuuu.......Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh

Dev - socchanna bhi maat

Vikky - Abe tere senior hai jada mat udd warana apne jaan khoo dega

Dev - mere pass khucch khoonne. Ko nahi hai par tuu jarur khoooyega

Vikky- abe haramkhoro tum kaya apnne baap ka wait kar rahe ho mar daloo esse aur uss chammak chhaloo ko mere ghar

Maroo...... oo....o..............
Shor sun kar waha kaafi log ekahatta ho jate hai

Dev picchhe hatt kar ek laat dinesh ke muuh par marata hai aur vo picche gir jatta hai tabhi uss ladki ki aawaj aati hai bhai....iiii...ya.aaaa

Dev picch mudd kar dhekhata hai ek ladka ladki (riccha ) ke kapdde faad nai ki kosis kar raha hai
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Dev gusses mai aa kaar appne back pocket mai sai iron Punch nikal kar phennata hai aur uus ke sir par maar detta hai jo siiddha uuss ke sir mai guss jatta hai aur vo vhi bhagawan ko pyaara ho jatta hai ye dhek kar sab ki faat jaati aur riccha too jaasee murti baann jayi

Par sarre dost gusses mai aakar uss par hamala kar

Etnne logo kaa ek sath hamala dev rok nahi paata ek laat uss kr peet mai paddati hai aur uss ke muh sai khoon nikkalnne lagata hai

Riccha jor si bhaiyyaaa. Usse harani bhi ho rahi thi ki ek laat mai kaise khoone aaa gya

Tbhi ek rod dev ke jhaag par padati hai aur usski jhaag fat jati hai aur road par blood hi blood

Riccha ab josh mai aa gayi thi

Tabhi riccha ek bada paatthar utha kar dinesh ke sai sir par mar deti ye dhekk kar vikky aag babula ho jatta hai aur

Vikky -ab tooo maragi ha ab tu gayi


Tabhi vha par ek car ruk jaati hai usse mai khucch adami nikkal te hai ek ke hath mai talwar the to bakiyo ke hath guns aur bhi samman the

Adami 1 -maalik aap jao hum dhekkh lenge

Vikky -ha aur ees ko marne sai pahele ek ladki ko mar denna

Adami 1 - ji

Aur vikky appne. Dosto ke sath vha sai nikal jatta hai

Adami 2- chal rani ab marne tayyar ho ja

Adami 1 apni talwwar sai ek waar karaata hai riccha par aur tabhi ekk jor daar chiiik nikkal jatti hai

Howa ye tha ki jaise hi vo waar karata hai dev riccha ke saamanne Aaa jata hai aur talwar uss ke pet mai guss jati hai aur ye dhek kar riccha behosh ho jaati hai

Tabu ek caar aadmi1 ko udda deti aur usse sarre adami boss kah kar uss ke pass jate hai

Ye sB etni jaldii ho rha rha tha ki kisi ko kuch samaj mai nahi aa raha tha



aur dev mokke ke fayada utha kar riccha ko le kar auto sai nikal jatta hai par riccha ko uthanne ki wajah sai usske pet
Par kaffi dabaw pad rha tha aur blood nikal rha tha jo auto sai ho kar road par tapak rha tha


Dev (man mai)- ye bhagawan bus esse sahi salaamat ghar le jaau uss ke baad mar bhi jaau to koi baat nahiii.

Ye mere sath kaya ho raha hai ek sath saari musibaat !

Udhar Dev house

Komal- didi uncle ko call karoo naa kitni dher ho gayi hai

Savitri - ha beti call kar mai bhi dil ghabara rha hai

Saloni- lo papa ka phone aa gaya ha papa khuch patta chala

Suraj - ha beta dev ekdhum thik hai tum log khaanna kah lo mai kaal aaunga

Saloni - kal ku papa

Suraj - vo beta abhi mujhe kaam sai delhi janna pad rha hai to Dev ko bhi sath le ja raha hu

Saloni -(asscharaya sai) dev aap ke saath ja raha hai .

Suraj -ha beta aur phone kaatt deta hai

Saloni -(hass kar ) maa dev papa ke sath delhi ja rha

Komal aur savitri ek sath -sacch mai

Saloni - haaa sacch maa chaloo komal hum dinner ready karte hai tab tak maa aap aaram karo

Savitri-beta bahuut aram kar liya ab toda kaam kar lu

Komal /saloni -bilkul bhi nahi

Komal - aap tab tak tv dhekho

Savitri- thik hai thik hai jaoo aur remote mujhe de do.

Usske baad savitri tv dheknne lag jati hai aur ye dono maharani kahanna banatte hue baate kar rahi hai

Saloni - arrr komal too bata rahi thi ki tujhe koi ladaka passand aaaya hai to kab kar rahi hai propose.

Komal-(ronne jaisa muuh banna kar ) ussne maana kar diya.

Saloni - kon hai ullo ka patha jisne merri pari jaisi bhen ko manna kar diya

Tabhi picche sai awaaj aati hai
Pari to mai hu aap kis ki baat kar rahi ho

Komal -what a surprise pari aur neha tum dono yaha

Pari - ha aaj hi mama ghar aaye to hamme unke sath aa gaye 1 month ho jaye bhaiya ko dhekhe binna kaha hai woo


kaya unnhe hamari yaad nhi aaati aur unnhone call karanna bhi band kr diya aur humara call bhi nahi uthate hai ab mai kabhi mama ke ghar nahi jaungi




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