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" कुछ आसान से लगने वाले रस्ते अचानक से कितने मुश्किल हो जाते हैं,कविता रोड्वेज की बस में खिड़की से लगी बैठी उस फटी हुयी डायरी के पन्नो के साथ बहती सी जा रही थी –

“विरेंदर! तुम हमे छोड़ तो नहीं दोगे ना “कविता ने विरेंदर के शानों पर सर टिकाते हुये वही सवाल किया जो जमाने की हर वो लडकी शादी से पूर्व अपने प्रेमी को अपना सर्वस्व सौंपने के बाद पुछती ही है !

“नहीं जान ! कैसी बात कर रही हो, घर बार सब छोड़ दिया तुम्हरे लिये,अब भी यकीन नहीं करती हो मुझपर” विरेंदर ने उसके होठों को चूमते हुये कहा !

“यकीन ना होता तो आती क्या भला सबकुछ छोड़कर..बस ऐसे ही कह दिया...तुम पर तो खुद से ज्यादा यकीन है” वो बेल की कि तरह विरेंदर के नंगे जिस्म से लिपट गयी !

पूर्वी उत्तर प्रदेश के एक छोटे से गांव से आये थे दोनो,जवानी का पहला इश्क़ परवान चढ़ा तो घर और घर वालों को छोड़्कर सपनो की नगरी मुम्बई में आ बसे थे !


कहते हैं प्यार से पेट नहीं भरता,लेकिन जब प्यार मे इंसान अंधा हो जाये तो उस वक़्त ये सब याद नहीं रहता ! कविता और विरेंदर को मुम्बई आये 6 महिने ही हुये थे और प्यार का वो रंग फीका पड़ना शुरु हो गया था ! विरेंदर ने एक ऑटोमोबॉइल कि दुकान पर मेकैनिक की नौकरी कर ली थी..वो अक्सर रात को लेट आता था ! कविता उसके आने का इंत्जार करती रहती,पहले तो सब कुछ ठीक रहा, लेकिन फिर वो रात को बहुत देर से आने लगा था और फिर कुछ दिन बाद घर इतने नशे की हालत में पहुंचता की कविता न उससे कुछ पूछ पाती और न वो कुछ बताता !

धीरे धीरे दोनों के बिच प्यार की जगह एक दूरी ने ले ली और फिर उस दूरी कि जगह एक नफरत पनप उठी ! दो दो तीन तीन दिन तक विरेंदर घर से गायब रहता ! कई बार कविता के पुछने पर दोनो के बिच बहस हुयी थी और विरेंदर ने कविता को बुरी तरह से मारा था !

जिस प्यार की तलाश में कविता मां बाप,भाई बहन सब कुछ छोड़ आयी थी आज वो प्यार ही उससे दूर हो रहा था ! "

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क्या हुआ उनके आगे के जीवन में,क्या रहा था उनका अतीत और क्या कुछ ऐसा था जो दोनो को फिर से पास ला पायेगा या फिर ये दूरी एक दरार का रूप लेकर उनके रिश्ते को निगल जायेगी...इन सब सवालों के साथ अपडेट जल्दी ही आयेगा..साथ बने रहेंं

दोस्तों,कहानी एक सच्ची घट्ना पर आधारित है जिसमें आप सबके मनोरंजन के लिये कुछ परिवर्तन किया गया है !

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