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Vilayaatu payyan

Yen peyar Kiran,
Naan chennai outer ril oru schoolil 11 aam vaguppu padikkuren, padippil aarvam kammi aanal vizhayaattil padu sutti, engal school lil vilayattu pottigal ellam vegu sirappaga nadakkum , 8aam vaguppu varai ko ko , kabadi, basket ball, throwball, volleyball enavum, atharkku mel vaguppukku football , cricket , hockey pondra vilayattukal undu.
Naan yenadhu schoolin volleyball team captain, football um aaduven.
Yengal school romba strict aathanala padikkalaina romba kastam , parent ta vara sollu , depromote , tc nu romba prechana.

Vilayadu vadharkagave naan oru vaati 9th la depromotion vangi ithe school le continue pannen.
10th varailkum engalukku PT master Selvam iruntharu avaru romba jolly type , Ella competition kkum kootitu povaaru . Enga yella pasangalum ponnungalum avara oru friend aga than paappom. Enga school la avaru oru 10yrs ah Vela paakkuraru. But 10th oda avaru resign pannitaru . Oorukku poi farm land pakkanum nu sollitu poitaru.
Ithanale ennakku konjam school interest pochi.
11th la irunthu pudhu pt staff Nala school eh konjam kaduppu la than irunthanga.athuvum pt staff lady(Kuzhali) vera. Engalukku konjam kaduppu than,

BTW,
Naan 9th depromotion vaangunathula oru nallathu yenna na athu, Janani , Janani ya paththi sollanum na Ava yen height irruppa (5.9) nalla odambu ,karu karu nu neelamana mudi, konjam vellai, Ava full peru Janani Laksmi. Iyer family , 8th varakkum zonal level ko ko player , apparom womens volleyball team la irrukka. .9th la than naan Ava kooda padikka aarambichen, ennoda oru vayadu chinna va, Avalukku yenna romba pudikkum , yenna padi padi nu sollikite irruppa. Naanum avalum ella topic pathiyum pesuvom ellame than😋. 9th la thaan first time avala kiss adichen , ennoda modha kissum athu thaan. Appadiye valanthu engaloda uravu appo appo engaloda sooda thanikkavum udhavuchi. Ava kooda 10th la 3times district level games kku tour poirukken. Yen pazhaya pt master kkum arasal porasal ah enga kadha theriyum.11th Ava veliyur la vera school kku poita padikka.
Janani ya naan anubavicha thayum, Ava Enna anubavicha thayum apparama varnikkuren.


School aarambichu oru 3maasam aachi,11th std na enga school la podhuva padikka solla maatanga 12th la sethu strict panniruvanga, aana 3 maasam aagiyum oru competition kkum nominate pannala, athletes pasangala mattum rendu vaati zonal competition kku kootitu ponanga, enga sports pakkam Ava varave illa, kaduppu la principal kitta pt staff (Kuzhali) va complaint pannalam nu pasangaloda ponom.
Ulla Kuzhali yum iruntha , engalukku athuve oru shock.

Principal: Enna principal room la sport vilayada vandheengala nu , nakkal pannanga.
Me: (dhairiyam ah ), Kuzhali mam ah pathi complaint panna vanthom nalla Vela avungale Inga thaan irrukkuranga.
Principal: Kuzhali 3months le complaint ahn de un mela , nu sirichanga, Enna pa Kuzhali ennoda best friend, onnum illa pesi sari panniralam.sollunga Enna nu .

Naan appadiye shock la oru step pinnadi vanten. Kuzhali enna appadiye oru mora moracha , naan konjam bayanthu appadiye nithanam aanen.

Friend 1: Illa mam , pt miss ithu varaikkum oru competition kku kooda nominate pannala, but athletic pasanga ellam 2 times zonal competition kku poitanga.

Principal: Enna sollura Kuzhali?

Kuzhali: illa mam ithu varaikkum vantha competition ellam 1 to 2weeks off edukkura mathiri irunthuchi, aana Athletics kku 3days than maximum athaan , 12th vera next year nu konjam concentrate pannala.

Principal: appadiye yellam paakkatha, pasanga laam padippula romba sutti, Kiran ah thavira,

Sollitu Enna pathu sirichanga.
Naan konjam palla kadichi sirichen,
Principalcont.) But Kuzhali u have to concentrate on them also, they need equal sports and education.

Kuzhali: yes madam, next month eh , kavanichiduren.

Principal: so boys, Kuzhali is district level athletic champion , so konjam partiality paathiruppa(smiled at Kuzhali), but she will take care from now.

Friends: thank you mam.

Appadiye kelambinom.

Kuzhali veliya vandhu ennayum yen friends ah yum kooptu evening school time kku apparom ground la assemble aagunga oru discussion vachikalam nu sonnanga.


Naan konjam ava mela kaduppu la than irunthen, but enga school pasanga laam avalukku romba jollu viduvanga, avalukkum ava sema kattai nu thimiru.

Evening kku munnadi pasangala kooptu oru meeting potten,

Friend1: Enna machan PT yum princi yum friend ahm, oru chinna spy Vela paathu eppadi friends nu kandu pudi.

Me: sappa matter mama , athletic team girls kku therinjirukkum ketta solliruvalga

Friend 2: Ava mattum district match kku nominate pannala na sema gaand ayiruven da.

Me: dai first to oru zonal illa interschool tournament Keppom, apparom district adippom

Friend 1: correct than machi, rendu tournament aavum aachi, practiceum aachi. Super plan maams.

Friend2: maams su Kuzhali princi kitta pesum podhu unnaye moracha pola

Me: therila machi , yen mela sema gaand la than irukkura.

Friend1: kaadhal modhal la than start aagum, machi

Me: mayiru, Ava mattum nammala tournament kootitu pola na , modhal vera level than

Friend1: machan anga paru Kuzhali vara,

Naanga water station kitta thani kudikkura mathiri pesitu irrunthom ,athu engaloda valakkamana spot. Athu coridar oda dead end .Ava enga kitta irunthu oru rendu class thalli ninu attender kitta pesitu iruntha.

Friend2: machan avala paaru da, sema kattai da, orange saree kku appadiye thookala irrukkura.

Ava nalla engala moracha, most ah yenna moracha, Appadiye kalanjom, ellarayum evening kabadi court vara sollitu kalainthom.

Kuzhali paththi sollanum na, enna vida konjam kullam (5.2) irruppa , romba light ahna athletic odambu, surutta mudi avalukku, pinnadi blouse mudiyira neelam varai ava mudi irrukkum , nalla vadiva na pen, ava kaai nalla periya size cricket ruber ball mathiri urundaiya shape ah tight ah irrukkum, soothum athukke ethappla nalla eduppa irrukkum, nalla menmai yaana sadhai udal muluvathum, shikkunu ava iduppu, manjalum brown num sentha ava color eduppa kattum ava udamba, ippadi sollite pogalam.

Kabadi court kku naan poitu irunthen, enga school la romba periya ground onnu irrukku aana athu full athletics kku, enga school kku pakathule oru ground irrukku athuvum enga school oda senthatu thaan but anga periya ground aana football, volleyball,hockey, cricket irrukkum. most ah naanga intha athletic ground pakkam vara maatom, eppayavadhu high jump practice kku varuven(monthly once or twice).
Kuzhali most ah school ground la thaan irruppa athaan anga meet vachiruntha,


Naan thaan first anga ponen, nadanthu poitu iruntha pothe Kuzhali ya pathen, avan kabadi court orathu la irunth marathu nezhal la ukkanthu iruntha, naan avala paathu te nadanthen, meendum enna morachite irruntha,
arugil nerungiyaudan,

Kuzhali: enna sir, neenga mattum vanthirukeenga, unga gang enga,

Me: naan commerce dept class over avunga ellam lab la irrukuranga oru 15 mins la vandhiduvanga.

Kuzhali: ooh unaku konjam padippu kammi nu sonna princi athu nala taan commerce sa nu nakkal la pesina.

Me: athlaam onnum illa naan commerce padikkanum atha nala thaan, btw commerce um kastam thaan, cheap ah nenaikatheenga.

Kuzhali: unnakku padippu la ellame kastam thaan nu solli, enthirichi ennidam nadakka arambicha.

naan track pant mathitu thaan vanthen so avala mathikkama warm up panna arambichuten, Kovam kaluthu alavu ennakku, Yen warm up le avalukku therinjuthu

Kuzhali: thambi kovam laan romba kaatatha , vaala otta aruthiduven, princi kitta complain panra alavukku periya aalo nee.

naan pesi na sanda aayidum nu silent ah skip jumps pannitu irunthen

Kuzhali: 2 weeks la ***** govt school interschool competiton varuthu, volley ball mattum football team ah select pannitu enna vanthu paaru. 3days camp

en mandaiku athu erurathu kulla ava edatha vitu nadakka araambichuta, en friends appo thaan anga vantaanga,

Friends: good evening miss,

Kuzhali : time keep up pannanum illati vilayatu laam ungalukku kadayathu, ennala ungalukku weight pannnitu irrukka mudiyathu, unga boss kitta solliten ketukonga.

appadiye nadanthute sollitu poita.

Friend1: yenna mama miss un kita thaan pesumaam, enna kuzhal oothum kannan neenga thaana

Friend2: dai gammunu irrunga da, namaloda avana thaan PT semaya kalaichita pola, machan gaandula warm up pannuran.

Me: 2 weeks la Govt school la tornament ahm 3days ahm, Volley ball and football team ketta.

friend1: super da, machan PT , princi matter ippo aiyaakku theriyum, gayathri sollita lab la.

Me: yenna friendship da PT princi kkum,

friend1: PT missum Princi thangachiyum school friends, so family friends vera, ***** govt school la ava 2 yrs coach assistant ah work pannirukka but edho prechana naala vela ya vittu thookitangalam, Selvam sir ponadhu naala ivala princi eduthitalaam.

Me: dai athe ***** govt school kku thaan da namala tournament kootitu porenu sonna,edho plan pannra machi kojam naraya matter karandhu konga avala pathi, next week la irunthu practice pannanum, 2 days la team kudukkanum.

appadiye konjam pesitu kalanchu poitom.

naatkal pochi , naanga Volleybal team kku mattum per kuduthom, 3 days la rendu match aada mudiyathu.

practice nadakkum podhu Kuzhali vandhu paapa aana edhuvum pesa maata, team list ah mattum vangi vachi kitta.

6 matches engalukku, 3 league , oru qf , oru sf and final onnu.
enga school la irunthu 40 mins drive so school busle poitu vanthiduvom, daily early morning 6.30am school la assemble aagiduvoom evening 7pm kku school la irunthu vetukku poiduvoom.

enga volleyball eam sema strong, 2 times junior level district tornament ke poittu bronze win pannirukkom.

easy ah finals poitom,

3rd day football and volley ball finals, rendu game layum host team finals kku vantanga,

football finals mudinchi host team win pannitanga, volleyball finals start ana udane school eh enga ground ah suththi thaan ninnaanga,

athu varaikkum Kuzhali oru match pakkayum varala, firstu match engalukku host ooda athuvum finals, oppposite team kooda oru karuppa height ana aalu nalla solid buddi kannadi pottu police officer mathiri ninutu irunthaan , vayasu 40 irrukkum, opponent coach pola
avara paatha engalukke sema bayam ah irunthichi, avunga team pasanga lum nalla circus tiger mathiri avaru solluratha mattum thaan seiranga.

Kuzhali enga side vanthu ninutu iruntha, black saree katti iruntha, eppayum kanji pottu thaan sari kattu va, saree nalla stiff ah irunthuchi. valakkathu kku maaraga ava moonjilayum konjam bayam irunthichi,
eppayum thimira nippa aana ippo mundhanaya udamba suththi stiff ah pudichi bayandhu court ah ye paathitu iruntha.

match start aagi konja nerathule opponent side match poga arambichidichi(volleyball term la sollanum na oru smash kooda nanga rebound edukkala), antha opponant coach mattum thaan kathi kathi celebrate pannitu irunthan ov oru pointukkum, opponent team naan sonna mathiri circus tiger mathiri onnu pola avaru solluratha kettu win pannitanga.
yengalukku antha coach ah patha sema kaduppa irunthuchi, over ah kathi kathi celebrate panna aana avan team romba laam celebrate pannala avungalukku ulle handshake pannitu poitanga, naan poi opponent team captain kku handshake kudukka ponen, avunga coach ennayum sethu oru mora morachan naan appadiye schok la ninen, opponent team dressing room kulla poitanga. oru edho uyir eh illa tha match pola engalukk uirunthuchi. enga pasanga ellam appadiye soorva ukkandhutanga ground le.
Kuzhali moonjila unnam athe reaction konjam schok konjam bayam konjam veruppu, appa diye ninutu iruntha, naan mattum Kuzhali pakkathula poi ukkandhu rest eduthen, drinks kudichite sorry miss nu sonnen, ava reaction eh kudukkala. ava paarva paakura pakkam paathen, opponent coach engala paathu vanthitu irunthaan. kuzhali moonji verthudichi,

opponent coach enga pakkathula vanthu, nalla katta kural la Kuzhali kku pinnadi ninu yenna paatha mathiri,

enna Kuzhali periya private school la PT miss na udane saree laam katti aale maarita , kasu romba kudukuranga pola,

naan shock le ninutu irrunthen, Kuzhali moonjila reaction marala.mellum avan,

intha pasangalukku nee thaan training ah sutha waste, nee pesama yen koodave irunthirukalam, naan pathu senjirupen nu sollum podhu, enga princi ground kku vanthutuirunthanga ,as usual princi oda brisk walk la vanthanga

Princi nadanthu vanthatha paatha udane Kuzhali bayam konjidhichi, opponent coach sathamum koranjidichi.

Opp.Coach: good evening madam,

Princi: good evening Natraj

Opp.Coach: sorry Mam, enga pasanga unga school la defeat pannitanga.

Princi: its all in the game,

Princi: Kiran take boys to the bus and leave , driver needs to take bus early it seems., Kuzhali come with me we will go in our car .

thanks you Natraj nu sollitu kelambitanga, Kuzhali ya kai ya pudichitu kootitu poitanga. on the way la enga pasangalayum wish pannitu poitanga

naanga bus(actual ah mini van) eri school ku poitom. nadantha tha paatha Princi kku Kuzhali ooda reaction therinji thaan vanthu kootitu pona mathiri irunthichi, ennakku romba thought process oditu irunthichi,

Van la eri ukkandhu irunthen nalla traffic , normal ah ve 45 mins aagum. yella players um kaduppula irunthom, yaarum yaar koodavum pesala, thani thaniya ukkanthirunthom, naan kadaisi seat la irunthen,

ennakku full ah kuzhali ya pathi thaan yosana,
yennai prechana avalukku munadi school la, I felt like she has to revenge Natraj but she couldnt .
athanale ennakku match jeichirukkalam nu thonuchi. appadiye yen yosanai poitu irunthichi, konjam konjam ma topic ah mathalam nu veliya vedikka pathen,

Oru Aunty scooter la traffic la drive pannitu irunthu chi, nalla marwadi aunty mathiri dress pottuirunthichi, 6pm irrukkum dull sun light irunthuchi, Van seat angle la irunthu boobs cleavage clear ah therinjudhu, appadi ye yen sports trousers ah nalla erakkitu, jatti ye yum kila yerakkinen,

thambi nalla thoongitu irunthaan, konjam antha aunty pakkam kanna vachitu, thambi ya thattunen vega ma enthirichan, handkerchief ah thodaila vachitu appadiye thambi ya massage pannite irrunthen,

antha Aunty konjam munnadi poiduchi, appo thaan ava mudhuga paathen, iduppu valaivum mudhugum romba sooda irunthuchi, thambi romba tension ah irrunthaan, udambu vali yellam kaanama pochi, konjam saanji nalla resting position kku vanhen, thambi nalla hard solid aayitan, yen thambi konjam slim ah iruppan aana normal size ah vida konjam length, so veliya irunthu yethavathu busla irunthu paatha nalla therinjidum kai adikkuran nu, so konjam bayamum irunthichi,

romba traffic, so moving eh aagala vandi, Aunty bike ippo yen window kitta irunthuchi, ava ippo yetti yetti paatha road ah traffic move agura mathiri theriyala, front la speedometer mela kai ya madakki vachi thalaya athula saanji rest edukka aarambichita, yammmmahhhh side view la yen thambi thenaritaan, light ah thanni vanthicrichi ennakku,

Nalla kaai, white saree nala nalla shape therinjuthu, koranjathu 38D irrukkum, ava mudhugula thala mudi padardhu irrukku, appadi ye mudi konjam konjam mah right sidela vila , thambi kushi aayitaan, marble mathiri ava mudhu gu, nalla valu valu nu iduppu, yennakku oru kai ya veliya vitta ava mudhuga thadavida laam avvalo kitta thaan iruntha,
Window veliya kai ya vittu avala appadiye mudiya puduchi thooki ,ava vaai ya yen thambi la soruganum, appadiye onnnoru kaiya ava kaaila pudichi iluthute paal karakkanum nu yochikitte, appadiye kanna moodi thambi ya vegama uruvi vitten, appadiye Aunty ah paathu soodu yethinen, konjam nimichathula aunty traffic ah thaandi poiduchi, moonja kooda paakala, aana antha mudhuga naan enga paathalum adayalam solluven, Appadiye yen janani mathiri paranthu virinja mudhugu, konjam konjama janani pakkam yen yosana pochi. .. . . . .. .


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9th naan class le romba amaidhi, konjam asinga ma irrukkum, depromotion naala yen juniors kooda thaan ukkanthu padikkanum oru verusham, arambathula konjam vekkam ma irunthuchi, apparam athuve palagidichi .. .
9th la irunthu engalukku half trouser to full trouser promotion , girls kku pinafore la irunthu salwar kku promotion, athu varaikkum Janani ya salwar la pathathe illa, avala naraya vaati naan junior ko ko team la paathiruken, but anaikku class ku ava salwar la ulla vantha udane naan kannu edukkama paathitu irunthen, avalukku yenna theriyum athunala alagana oru smile panna,
yennakkku side la oru row munnadi poi ukkandha, thirumbi hi sonna, naan outu! !.
School uniform la avala paatha kick ennakku unnam nyavagam irrukku, yedho vayasukku vantha mathiri feel aanen, water bottle ah eduthu madak madak nu thanni ya kudichi table la vachen,
Yen pallu ellam kusa arambichidichi, ennala enna nadakkudhu nu puriyala, class la oru 15 per iruppanga aana ennakku ava mattum thaan kannukku therinja.
Ava enna marubadiyum paathu siricha, pinna yen kitta vanthu,

Janani: Hi , neenga yen class thana , super . .
Me: ennakku orre blur ah thaan therinjjithu, aaman (nu asadu valinjen),

ava appadiye thirumbi poi ukkantha, naan thirumbi yum thanni ya kudichen, yennakku yen thambi koosu ra mathiri irunthichi, appadiye bottle ah vachi yen thambi ya pant oda ammukki bottle la aappadiye rest panni pudichen.konjam konjam ah ennakku nenaivu vanthathu.
Janani ya paathen avaloda retta jada ava munnadi rendu maarbayum urasiya badi dhuppata kku mela irunthichi, salwar oda pin pakkam yerakkam mudhuga konjam ah than kaamichudhu, moonu kokki(hook) mudhugoda orasunabadi tension oda uchathula ava alaga marachitu irunthichi .
ava idduppukku mela maarbu kannale alakkura mathiri ava salwar nalla tight ah odamboda valaiva velipaduthichi, ennakku ava la thadavi pakkanum nu thonuchi, konjam yen water bottle ah tight ah aluthi pudicha mathiri sootha seat la thechi konjam pinnadi thallinen,
Avala face ah pakkanum nu thonuchi, konjam medhu va yen kaala vachi munnadi row bench ah thallinen, GIRRRRRRRRuuuu nu satham, ava pattunu thirumbu na , antha iduppu oru twist aagi oru jada pinnadiyum maru jada munnadiyum vilunthichi,
konjam odd ah thonuchi , paatha class eh kitta thatta full agiduchi, oru 30 per ippo iruppanga

Ippadiye Janani ah pakka pakka ennakku 9th rendavatha padikkurom ne thonala, pudhu sa fresh ah irundhichi,
Oru naal naan thanni pudikka water station ponnen, anga oru classmate ,
"Anna class miss ungala staff room ku kooptanga"
Me: Dai un friends ellarukkum sollu, yevanavadhu enna anna nu koopta, polleernu Ara villum, "DA" pottu kooda kooptu ko , puriyudha,
serinu sollitu oodinaan.

pinnadi oru sirikkura kural, yen thambi koocham aanam, aaha Janani thaan nu thirumbunen, avale thaan,

Hey variya nu ketta,
ennakku kannu pithingi veliya vanthirichi, thambi verachitan, ava water bottle ah vachi tu yen pakkathula ninutu iruntha,
paathi fill aana water bottle ah modak modak nu vaai la oothitu,
avala paathu yenna puriyala nu sonnen,

Janani: nee yen enna pathu over reaction kaatura,
Me: apparram solluren, nee yenna sonna?
Janani: hmm, miss ennayum unnayum staff room la pakkanum aahm, variya nu ketten,
Me: iru thanni fill pannitu polam nu sonnen,

Ava mela irunthu powder oh soap oh sema vaasana, romba close la iruntha, thirumbi thirutu thanama paakalam nu paathen, ava sagajama enna pathute thaan iruntha,
(mind voice): Kirana silent silent cool down cool down, ava casual ah irrukkura, nee yum maintain pannu da,

Me: unnakku Salwar super ah irrukku, ithukku munnadi unna pathathukkum ippo paakurathukkum romba vithyasama irukku,
Janani: nee ithukku munnadi yenna paathirukiya, Volleyball ko ko court kku vantha kooda engala yaarum madhikkama, thalli poyee vilayadunga di nu solluve,
Me: match serious ah poirukkum, athavida appo nee laam pakka chinna ponnu mathiri iruppa, ippo .. . (nu nippatiten)
Me: seri miss edhukku kooptanga,
Janani: theriyala, something related to volleyball nu guess pannuren,unna vachi enna panna mudiyum nu (oru joke adicha)
Me: hmm , neram, enna vida chinna ponnu ellam kindal adikkuthu,

sollite steps yerunen, Ava ennakku munnadi vegama steps yeri naa ,

ava soothu nalla alava ava koodave padi yeruchi, mela ninna, naan ava pakkam pona udane yenna paathu, "paathukko un height naanu nu sonna", ava shoulder yen shoulder oda otti irunthuchi, oru silla second thaan naalum, enna la ava udamboda kulurchiya unara mudinjithu,

Staffroom la, Mam enna paathu,
Mam: Kiran volleyball kku Selvam sir unna oru tournament kaga 1 week ketrukaru, ennakku suthama pudikkala, but Principal lum unna anuppanum nu solluranga, So next week nee school kku varamudiyathu ,
Principal and Selvam sir came into the staff room,

Mam: good noon mam,
Princi: yeah good noon,
Selvam: enna da, next week tournament ah kalakkiranum,
Mam:Sir neenga thaan Sir avana kedukkurathu,
Princi: Geetha mam dont discourage him, he has got 2 shield last time, atha paper la poda mattum namma atha vaangala, We have to encourage such talents,
But Kiran, u have to concentrate much on studies also,
Princi(cont) : Btw Janani U have to coordinate Girls Jr Volleyball team, so we have selected you.
Selvam: Madam, Janani is a best Captain material and she also plays volleyball well, she will be ready for next Girls tournament that is the main reason I selected her to coordinate. Kiran can easily guide them,
Princi: ok Selvam its all yours now, Kiran and Janani all the best,(Princi walked out of staff room )

Selvam: Mam , Kiran ah yum Janani ya yum I will take for 1 period , konjam documentation irrukku,
Mam: neenga thaan Sir ivangala kedukkurathu, ponga ponga, Pls kannungala studies kkum equal importance kudunga, all the best nu engala pat panni annuppunanga,

On the way to PT room,
Me: Sir enna Sir, tournament nu shock ah kudukureenga, ennakku sandhosha tha adakka mudiyala Sir,
Selvam: dai adangu da, nee konjam padippa kavani, ennala permission vaanga mudiyala, Princi un kitta nalla support ah pesura, ivalavu neram ava room la thittu vangitu irunthen,
Me: vidunga Sir arasiyala ithellam saatharanam. . (lol)
Janani: Sir documentation kku enna laam eduthitu varanum,
Me and Selvam: he he he nu avala paathu sirichom,
Selvam: Documentation laam mudichi, namakku entry pass eh vandhudichi, chumma oru discussion kaga koopten, Dai kiran, nee team list ah mattum ready panni kudu, unnaku comfortable ah paathu select panniko, Salem la itha vaati tournament saturday train book pannitharen nu Princi sollirukanga,
Me and Janani : Sir salem , ah
Selvam: enna vilayadureengala , namma school ku spl invite for chennai zone, last time Salem govt boys school ah oodaviteengale athe tournament thaan, ippo avunga ground la,
Janani: sir enga veetla konjam kastam Sir,
Selvam: dont worry, Principal athellam paathupanga, naan yerkanave solliten, if your brother wishing to come also our school will support, hosting a tournament as coordinator is a best experience for you, So dont hesitate.
Janani: ooh thank you Sir,


Ennakku janani ooda periya sandhosam ippo vandhirukku, volleyball tournament, pasangala vachi oru meet pottu team laam select panni pratice panna solliten, athe mathiri Janani kooda senthu Junior women team ah yum coaching kudukka help pannen, Janani felt extremly comfortable with my help,

Friday oru 4hrs practice irunthuchi, boys team laam nalla set aagi irunthuchi, but girls Jr team la konjam team work illa, Janani aalayum control panna mudiyala, So full ah Janani ooda thaan naan practise la irunthen,

(yengalukku school la food kuduppanga with fees athu , vennam na fees la korachiduvanga)
Lunch la canteen kku pasangaloda naanum Sir'rum ponnom , Janani enna koopta,
Sir neenga ponga naan vandhiduren nu sollitu ava kitta ponen,

Janani: Dai , naan unnakkum sethu enga amma kitta lunch vangitu vanthen, vaa saapidalaam,

Me: (thirumbi paathen pasangalam poitanga saapuda), ooh ok pa .
PT room kku poye ukkandhom

Curd rice, smbar rice, papad nu ellam Iyer samayal, nalla sooda irunthu chi

Me: Super pa food,
Janani: enga amma oru small factory la workers mess la samaikkuranga, So Brahmin style la nalla irrukkum
Me: nee Non veg saapiduviya,
Janani: he he , saapiduven, naanum enga anna vum enga amma vukku theriyama chicken 65 or briyani saapiduvom, athu engalukku thrilling ah irrukkum.
Me: adippaavi, Iyer maami intha vela elam seiviya?
Janani: dai serious ah nee ennakku romba supportive ah irrukkura, team coordinate nu sonna udane edho pasangala meikkura vela nu nenechan, but ippo thaan theriyudhu, they want me to be captain like you, Selvam sir enna kooptu sonnaru, next tournament kku Girls Sr team la naan captain ah nominate pannanum nu.
Me: hmm varumkala Captain avargla le, vankkam,
Janani: ootatha da, un alavukku illa naalum naan nalla captain ah thaan irrupen
Me: this confidence is what u need, atha vittudatha, (sollite I got up)
Janani: thanks da, keep encouraging me , hey wait main item irrukku,

sollite oru chinna kinna tha open panna, Payasam athula . thorantha udane manam.

naan yenga amma kitta kettu unakkaga spl ah eduthitu vanthiruken, have it nu kudutha,
Naan oru spoon eduthu naakula spoon padama saapten, shhhhhhhhh sema soodu, hot box la irunthathu , soodu appadiye irunthuchi ,
ha ha nu sirichitu ava vangi oru spoon edutha, Naan ava la edharchiya paathen, antha spoon ah nalla oodhitu, vaai ulla uttu sappi edutha spoon ah,

Dai its awesome da, intha nu thiruppi ennakku neetina,Naan intha vaati alert aayiten, nalla ava paakura mathiri spoon ah vaai la vittu konjam echi ooda eduthen, ava konjam kooda kandukkala , appadiye onnoru spoon eduthu ava vaai ulla kondu poona,

ennakku oru paravasam, yen echi ava ulla poga pogudhu nu, ava appadiye vaai ulla spoon na vittu rendu udhadayum moodi konjam vachi yen echa suvacha mathiriye irundhathu, yennakku athu la oru paravasam.
tomorrow train la ellarukkum enga amma samachi tharen nu sonnanga, avungalukku naan poradhula romba sandhosam,

kai kaluvitu Sir ah pakka ponom, ella pasangalum assemble aagirunthanga

Selvam: Hai girls and boys , tomorow 8pm train, please assemble at school by 5pm , we will reach railway station in school bus. take your dresses and things as per the circular already shared with you, Girls u have to report to Janani for any questions or help, as well boys u can reach to me or Kiran. thank you , all can leave . all the best .

all left the ground

Janani & Me: Sir vera staff yaarum varalaya
Selvam: Naan venam nu solliten , Yennakku oru freedom irrukkadhu, ok va . Apparom romba thanks ma Janani unga annaPrinci kitta sanda pottu namakku yellam 3AC la ticket poda sollitanga. Unga annanukku thanks sollidu maa.
Janani: Sir stay laam enga sir,
Selvam: School le arrange pannirukanga , I know the school romba periya school , comfortable illana namma edhavathu arragement pannikalam, Offcource its near my native so nammakku selvaakku athigam.


School la irunthu bus kelmba time aachi, ellarum Janani kaga waiting, ava avunga anna ooda food box onna eduthitu late ah vandha, bus la yerna udane thaan naan paathen avala. first row le ukkandhuta . Bus odane eduthitanga.

Naan valakkamana last row le ukkanthiten, aana Ava romba different ah iruntha , first time Ava free hair vittu naan paakuren. Romba bright ah iruntha. Railway station ponnom ellarum romba nervous ooda train na nokki platform la luggage oda nadanthom. Yen kannukku janani therila. Thedinen kadaikkala.

Correct coach ah paathu erinen , anga Janani ah Ava Anna oda paathen, Janani sema alaga iruntha ,. Avungale Anna irunthathu naala romba concentrate pannama poiten,
aavarum enga bus la vandharunnu appo thaan therinjidhu. Intro kuduththa. Naan Hi sollite luggage ah sari paanunen. Side upper la naan yen luggage ah vachittu ange ukkanthen.
Pt sir oru round vanthu "all lock your luggages and sit in your respective places till tte comes nu sollite ponaru"
Janani ennakku munnadi row la ukkantha, naan avala nice ah paathu side lower (ennakku kel row) ah kamichen. Avalukku purinjitha nu theriyala.

Train kelamba unnam 15 mins irunthuchi, naanga ella rum Coach la avunga avunga seat la ukkanthitom, ellarukkum Janani dinner parcel kuduthuta,
Ellarum saaptitu irunthom
Thideernu, "how are you guys , are you all comfortable?" nu oru voice, enga Princi

Selvam: Hi madam, we didnt expect you,
Princi: school la paaka mudiyala, athaan oru surprise, enna ore manam ah irrukku,
Janani: My mom prepared food for all mam,
Prici: ooh nice, sweet mom, ok guys take care , play carefull and all the best.any problems or concerns u can tell me directly iam here till train starts.
nu sollitu. Selvam sir ah kooptitu veliya poitanga.

Train started, konjam nerathule ellam thoonga bed ah ready panna aaarambichu tanga ,

Janani oru box ah eduthitu restroom pakkam pona, naan Ava pinnadiye kelambunen, Ava mirror munnadi washbasin la face wash laam panna aarambicha, naan Ava pinnadiye ninu Ava moonja avaloda senthu mirror la paathitu irunthen, white color skirt nalla ankle varaikkum umberla mathiri alaga virinju irunthuchi, athula Micky mouse photo print aagi doll mathiri iruntha, oru black T-shirt pottu iruntha , athula front side layum Mickey mouse photo pink color la irunthuchi, Ava kuninji mogathula thanniya tap la irunthu rendu kaiaala puduchi mogatha kaluvitu thiruppi nimirdhu kannadila Ava face ah paatha, Ava ovvoru vaati kuniyum bodhu Ava soothu pinnadi yen pakkam vandhu enna idikkadha thoorathule ninathu, yen thambi aarvama jattiya kilchi vanthu Ava sootha thodanum nu paathan, ennoda unarchiya avaloda asaivu kelappi uttuchi,
Ennakku konjam munnadi ninnu Ava sootha yen thambi thadavi paakanum nu aasai, aana ganniyam thavari Ava veruppu aayitana ? Ippadi yen manasu la ooda, Ava Mysore sandal soap ah box la irunthu eduthu moonjila thadavuna,
Vega maga thadavuna, nalla alluthi moonja thecha,
Ava maarbu Ava theikkurathukku yetha mathiri kulungi wash basin ooda urasa, Ava soothum athe pol aaditu irunthuchi, soothu aaduvatha gavanicha yen thambiya va va nu koopidura mathiri irunthuchi, Ava marupadi thanniya oothi kaluvina, marubadiyum soap ah pottu thecha, antha vasanayum Ava kaaiyum asaivum, soothum asaivum, train asaivum ellam Enna sokka vachidichi, yen thambi thanni vadikkuranu thonuchi,
Avala ennoda rendu kaiya vachi iduppoda pudichi yennoda sethu amukki yen soota thanikkanum nu thonichi, aana ore kulappam iva Enna nenaippa nu sandhegam, naan yedhuvum pesla, Ava pesa aarambicha, edho powder ah munchila thechite .
Yenna da, silent ah nikkura padukkalaina nu ketta,
Me: illa , un micky mouse ah thaan paathitu irrukkuren nu sirichen,
Janani: nalla irrukka? Yen Anna than vangi kuduthaan, pudhusu
Me: romba alaga irrukkura,neeyum nu sonnen
Athukkulla Selvam sir anga vanthu dai ulla poi place la ukkantha pesunga nu sonnaru.
I'll sir nu solla aarambikkurathukku ulla avaru shit room ulla poitaru.

Naan other side la irrukkura tap la face wash pannitu vandhu paathen, Janani already poita, appadiye place kku ponen, Janani lower berth la paduthita, yennaye paathitu iruntha, ellarum light off pannitu screen ah pottutanga, time oru 9.55 aachi.
Naan appadiye next row la irrukkura yen side upper la poi paduthen. Screen ah pottu thoonga mudiyama mulichitu irunthen,
Namma Ava sootha yen thambiya vachi thadavirukalamo , Ava la at least thottu irrukkalamo nu ippo ukkandhu varutha Patten.
Oru 20mins aachi,konjam kannu sokkuchi
Thideernu oru Kai keel row la irunthu vandhu yenna killitu poidichi, nalla killiduchi vallile yennakku mulippu vandhiduchi. Janani bed ah screen velakki paathen , bed sheet pottu thoongitu iruntha. Yennakku kolappama irunthuchi.
Wash basin kku near by row la thaan Janani yum girlsum thoongu raanga. Yen row la konja Girls sum other passengers um irrukuranga. Yennakku kela oru Jr ponnu irrukura. Adhutha row la yen friends um Selvam sirum irrukkuraru.
Naan keela yerangi bathroom pora mathiri Janani bed ah paathen, AC temp romba chill nu irunthuchi, Ava nalla woolen sheet ah pottu moodi kulir la surundu paduthu iruntha.
Naan toilet pakkam pogama thirumbi yen place kku vandhu, side lower screen ah vilakki edhukku Jr ponnu nammala koopta nu paathen,

My God, it's Janani.
Ulla va ulla va nu husky voice la koopta,
Naan konjam takku nu react pannen, ulla poitu screen ah mooditen ,
Me: Enna di Inga eppadi.
Janani: nee thana Inga vara sonna athaan,
thookathula iruntha avala ezhuppi maathiten da, ennakku thookame varala da. Naan regular ah 12kku thaan thoonguven.
Me: hmm kedi than,

Ava sidelower oda oru side saanji yen pakkam kala neeti ukkantha, naan avalukku opposite la Ava pakkam kaala neeti ukkanthirunthen, Yen kaal Ava iduppu kku konjam keela Ava thodaya thadavuna mathiri thoorathule irunthuchi, Ava kaal ennoda right thodai kitta irunthuchi,

Saappadu nalla irunthuchi, ac train la firstu, Salem super ah irrukkum nu ore mokka topic ah poitu irunthichi,
Naan konjam konjama yen kaala Ava thodai ooda vachi aluthinen, Ava odambu romba chillnu iruthichi , Ava pechile ennala kandu pudikka mudinjithu, Ava iduppu varaikkum woolen vachi moodi iruntha, naan konjam konjam ah Ava pesa pesa yen kala Ava bedsheet kku ulla kondu poiten,
Yedhachum yen thambiya sandhosa paduthira mathiri pannanum, apparam ma polamba kooda thu nu theliva irunthen,
Oru 15mins la yen kaal ah full ah kondu poiten, ippo Ava thodai kkum yen kaal paadha thukkum nadula Ava skirt thaan irunthichi, Ava thodaya thadava aarambichen, yen thambi kku ippo thaan purinchithu, konjam konjam ah elunthan yen thambi,
Ava topic topic ah pesuna ellam mokka topic , naanum unn sollite velaya paathen,
Konjam konjam ah thadavu rathula irunthu munneri, yen kaal virala vachi ava thoda sadhaya pudichi killinen,
Ava Enna paathu killadha da nu sollite, kaal la oru thattu thattina, naan nee mattum thoongina yenna killuna nu sollite porumaya Ava thodayula yen kaala vachi vilayanden,
Ava Ella kadhayayum pesina, naan paathi gavanikkala,
Oru 25mins aagirukkum, Ava vera 12kku paduthiruva, so konjam speedup pannalam nu .
Antha bedsheet ah yen iduppu varaikkum illuthi moodi, ulla Kai ya vittu Ava paadhatha pudichen.
Yen ullanga soodu avala kaalukku itham ah irunthathu, appadiye ava kaal yellam thadava aarambichen, Ava kadha sollura vegam koranjithu, screen kku veliya thalaya vittu paatha, marubadiyum ulla thirumbi kadha pesina, aana continuity illama pesina, yennakku appothaan avalukkum pudikkidhu nu kandupudichen, maami nalla form la irrukkura,
Naan yen kaal viral ah vachi nalla Killa aarambichen, appadiye mela yen bed la kaiya vittu yen bedsheet and pillow ah yen back la support kku vachen, konjam saaya kastama irunthichi aana yen kaal ippo Ava saanji iruntha seat oda back ah thoda mudiyudhu.
Konjam thariyatha varavachi Ava jattiya yen kaal aala thedinen, sikkala, yennakku thala kaadhu kaluthu ellam soodayidichi, oru ponna ippadi laam anubavichathu kadayathu,
Yedhirparatha nerathula maami ava paadhatha munne illuthu kaala madakki vaccha, bedsheet koodaram pola aanathu, Ava thoda konjam mela ponadhu nala yen kaal paadham ippo support illama Ava thodaikku adila vilunthathu aana avala thoda mudiayala. Yennakku sorkatha neruguna mathiri oru feeling, yen paadhatha konjam ava udamu pakkam neeti Ava udamba thotten, Ava jattiya skirt kku veliya irunthu thoda mudinjithu. Yennakku appothaan purinjithu yen kaal viralgal ava thodaikku naduvula irunthathu athavathu Ava punda mettai thottu vitten, yen thambi veeriyathin uchathula yen jattiya killikka paakuraan, yenakku valikka arambichuthu,
Appo thaan gavanichen Ava peccha nippatita,konjam nadunga aarambicha, Ava kaal ankle ah yen kaiya vachi irruki pudhichirunthen,
Ava udambu romba nadungiyathu, ennakku aatam ninurumo nu bayam vanthathu. Ava position ah kalachi naan toilet poitu varen nu sonna.

Vandhu thoonguren nu solliruvalo, illa Ava pinnadiye poirukalamo, nu ellam thona yen thambi nyavagam vanthathu, takku nu yen night pant ah yerakki tu yen jattiya kalatti thirumbi pant ah yethi jattiya pocket la vachen, avalum vandhita thoongalama nu ketta, 11.30thaan aaguthu oru 30mins la thoongalama nu sollite naan ippo koodaram amacha mathiri kaala maddakki ukkanthen,
To my shock Ava bedsheet kulla athe position kku vandha aana ipoo Ava kaala yen kaalukku naduvula vaccha, that means ippo yen kaal Ava kaalukku naduvulayum Ava kaal yen kaalukku naduvulayum kachithama porunthichi, ithukku mela medhuva poga onnum illa nu naana yen Right kaala nerah neeti Ava punda mettai thirumbi thotten, intha murai yen kaal Ava skirt kku ullave uttuten
avan konjam sinungina,
Dai kaal ah edu nu sonna, naan kandukkala, Ava adhukku mela pesala, naan ippo yen kaal katta verala vachi Ava pundai metta nonda aarambichen, avalukku ithamma padhamma pannunen, yennakku udambu suudu yeri yen thala muluvathum veppama maaridichi, yen kaiya vachi Ava kaal virala thadavi te, maami nu koopten, Ava pesala, naana yen katta virala Ava pundaila theikkura rythm la appo appo maami maami nu koopten, Ava pundai mettu la thanni ya unarthen.yenna di mooda irukkanu ketten, mmmmmh nu athe husky voice la sonna, Ava jattiya appadiye rendu verala pudichi illuthutu vitten, antha ellastic aala jatti thirumbi poye ava pundayoda eerathula ottikichi, appo oru chinna satham, Ava la paathu maami nu thirumbi koopten Ava respond pannala, aana Ava kaal ippo yen pakkam nerunga aarambichuthu, yen poola thotta udane pin vaanguna, aana avaloda aarvam yen thambiya thadavanum nu irunthuchi, marubadiyum nerungi vanthaal , naan unnam Ava pundaya yen viralgal aala thadavite irunthen, Ava kaal yen thambiya thodurathukku ulla naan yen kaiya vachi yen night panta konjam keela erakkunen, yennoda thodaikku perpendicular ah vanthu yen thambi seat ah thottan, avan kaal antha nerama yen thambiya nerungiyathu, thottavudane ava kaal intha murai vegamaga pinvaangiyathu, avaloda chill endra paadham yen thambikku veri ethiyathu, ippo yen thambi seat ah thodama verachi Ava kaala antha irutula thedinaan, naan yen idduppa konjam yerakku yen thambi Ava kaal ah theda udhavinen, maruppakkam Ava punda ya yen viral nuniyil kattu paduthi vaithirunthen, Ava kaal innoru murai yen pakkam varala, naan yen virala nalla Ava pundaila adila vittu mela varai nondinen, aval udambu aadiyathu, yen kangal sokki bothayil kidanthen, meduva punda vilayatai niruthinen,

Immurai ava yen kaala Kai vachi pundaila aluthina, naan avalukku anusarikkala , unnam yen kaal viralukkum Ava pundaikkum thooram irunthathu, Ava kaiya vachi amukkite mmmmh , mmmh mmmh nu monagina, Ava intha murai iduppa Kila irrakki yen kaal ah thedina,Ava punda arripoda uchathula irunthathu nu therinchithu,udane Ava loda kaal yen thambiya thottathu , avloda kaal viralukku naduvula yen thambi ya sikkavaithaal. Naan ippo Ava punda vilayatai thodarnthen.ava unnam yen kaal mela Ava Kai ya vachi nalla alluthina, avalukku ucham nerungidichi. Konjam methuva soft ah yen virala pundaila thadava ava kaal viralgalal yen thambiya pudikka mudiyala Ava peek ah nerungita, ava kaal ah stretch panna aarambicha, konjam munungal la adhigam aakinaal, naan konjam Ava pakkam poyee yen vaai aala ava kaal muttiya porvaikku mela irunthu kadichen, appadiye yen rendu kaiya skirt kulla vittu Ava thodaila alaya vittu soodu yethinen, maruppakkam yen kaal viral la eeram adhigam ah unarthen, Ava palla kadichitu kalutha thuruppi seat pakkama munangite iruntha, ippo Ava yen kaal la irunthu kaiya eduthita,

Tappu nu oru satham yaaro veliya light ah pottanga, naan react pannala edharthama ukkandhu pesura mathiri irukkatum nu appadiye ukkanthu irunthen, Janani aala bayatha control panna mudiyala, Ava kaala madichi ukkanthita, naanum kala edukka vendiyathu than tu pinnadi iluthen appadiye silent ah yen pant ah mela yethinen,
Janani kannula kaama bothai, ava konjam konjam ah suya nenaivukku vandha, kadhavu thorakkura saththam kettuchi, yaaro toilet poranga nu purinchithu, inthapakkam Janani aluga aarambichita, ennakku onnum puriyala, ippo ennayum bayam thaakiyathu. Ava dai nee mela po nu sonna, naan veliya etti paathen , middle row la yaaro missing , vegamaga naan adutha side toilet poitu oru nithanathukku vanthen, yen thambi ya paathen paavum paathile vanthathu nala avan unnam verachi thaan irunthan, maami thirumbi koopiduvaanu wait pannan, naan appadiye western toilet la ukkanthu thambi ya relax pannen, konjam vegama ve uruvinen, konja seconds le thanniya peechi adichaan, door wall yellam yen kanchi therichathu naan uchathula niruthama adichen, appadiye saantham aanen. Konjam tired ah irunthathu appadiye pant ah sari pannitu place kku ponen,
Selvam sir dai Enna da thoongalaya nu ketaru, naan toilet poneen nu sollitu poi paduthen, berth yerum podhu Janani ya paathen ava surundu bedsheet aala moodiruntha. Naan poi paduthen yen berth la.

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